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11 August 2012 @ 06:25 pm
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One night Danny actually had time to sleep but at 4:00 A.M his ghost sense went off and he had to get up.
There is something very wrong with this sentence. You mean that it flows like a sticky worm on sandpaper. Maybe. yo.

"Ugh, can't these ghosts give me and peace or time to sleep." Isn't that your job, you selfish boy, you! yo.

Then he got out of bed and changed into his sexy yo. Danny Phantom costume, went intangible and flew through the wall to go see what ghost it was.

To his surprise it wasn't any ghost he's ever seen before, it had long blue hair that was almost to it's legs why is she an it? Well, Sues are inhuman beasts...yo. and had blue/green Just say blue-green. Please. For me. yo.eyes, it was also female and was wearing a black tank top with a star in the middle of it that showed her belly and jeans that had wholes whole what? Pizzas? Pies? in them. She also had black boots on with purple straps on them.

Danny said "Who are you and what are you doing here.?" WELCOME TO FULL LIFE CONSEQUENCES! yo.

The ghost said " Oh sorry, I forgot to introduce myself, first of all I will be your worst nightmare but I won't fight you because you won't get to see me or even remember me after this is over with oh and my name is Jian, oh and I know that you like that goth girl, oh what is her name, oh well lets' forget about that now." Oh Wheatley how do I describe how bad this is. Hell came in the form of a ridiculous looking girl. And killed us. In Hell. yo.

Then after Jian introduced herself she used one of her special ghost powers on Danny, it was this purple mist that came out of her hand and Danny tried to get out of the way but missed and as it hit him he said "Ugh that hurt and I don't like like that girl, she's just my best friend." Is that really what you're worried about?  yo. How about your life?

Jian said "Oh no I know better, I've seen you around her and you don't act the same around any other person." I thought she was new..? She's actually a crazed fangirl from the real world. RUN, DANNEH! yo.

Before Danny had time to reply she got out this blue ball that kind of looked like frozen snow but it wasn't You mean a snowball? and she used some of her water powers and sparyed So she's fighting with it? Sparring? Get it? yo. it with water and it turned into some kind of mist. Water + Ice = Mist? Me = WTF. yo.

She then had control of the mist Did she not have control of it before? and threw it over Danny's head yo. and he then passed out. *Headdesk*

Then Jian picked up Danny and took him home, she new where he lived because she has the power to get into peoples heads and find out personal information about them. Stalker! yo. Don't you mean Skulker?

Then Jian thought " I'm glad I did this to him, he will soon find out something about one of his best friends, I know I am doing a good thing for him and I'm not the type of ghost to do that, but not all ghosts are evil even if he thinks so." Hello, Mojo-Jojo, how are you today? yo.

Then she finally got to his house and fazed disturbed through the wall to where his bedroom How do you know where his bedroom is?  yo. Magic. was and put him in his bed and thought, "He won't remember anything that happened when he wakes up, now I better leave before his ghost sense wakes him up and he sees me."

Then Jian fazed disturbed through the wall of his room and went through the ghost portal back to where she lived.

The next morning Danny's alarm went off and he woke up. He wondered how he got in his bed because he vaguely remembered fighting a ghost last night but he just put it off as a dream. "Oh, just a dream. I mean, why would fight ghosts? What a laugh." yo.

Then he got up and went to his closet to find something to wear today, he thought he would try something a little different today than what he usually wore. "Imma go nekid today :D " Hermy: No, why don't you try an outfit from this music video? You know, Hurricane? yo.

He picked out a top that looked like his other one but it was black with a blue oval in the middle of it and blue trimming on the neck hole and the sleeves. I no lik style. YO!

Then he picked out his normal baggy blue jeans that he normally wore They aren't normally baggy...and then he decided to try different shoes to annoy all the fans yo. , they were still tennis shoes but they were blue with purple on them.

After he was done getting dressed he went to the bathroom and brushed his teeth and used the toilet then he went down stairs and grabbed a piece od toast even though he doesn't like it and then grabbed his back pack and went out the door before his parents or his sister saw that he was leaving for school. Why do we need to know all this?  yo. Dude, TMI.

Then he decided to fly to school that day so he changed into Danny Phantom and flew to school. Department of Redundancy Department

He finally got to where he was and was glad there wasn't any ghosts to make him late for class today, then he ran into the school and met up with Sam and Tucker. We already know how his day goes, stop with the tiny details. yo.

He said " Hi Sam and Tucker." Yo, we dun need dose quotations, yo. yo.

They said, " Hi Danny and then Tucker said "wow I can't believe your actually on time today, did u My wrath toward the use of this letter cannot properly be described.  yo. catch all the ghosts last night or wasn't there any?" Or was not there any? Kill me. Kill me now. yo. *Shot by Joshua*

He said " Well actually I remember fighting one ghost but I can't remember anything about it, which is really odd, I woke up this morning and was in bed and thought it was a dream but it seemed more real than that but I just can't remember it that much so I guess I will just forget about it for now. RUN ON SENTENCES!  Y U MARATHON? YO.

Sam said " It's ok Danny, I'm sure it was nothing and then she thought "well I must have been something but I just don't know what." Just what are you? yo. Something, that's for sure...

Then Danny said "What did you say after you said you were sure it was nothing, who said what? yo. I could've sworn you said something like you thought it had to be something but you don't knwo You are impressive. what?"

Sam just gave Danny a funny look O.o Derp. yo. and said " Danny I didn't say that I thought it.

Danny just looked at her and said "What, no you couldn't have thought it because I heard that perfectly clear, you had to of said that, Tucker didn't you hear her say that?" Oh Wheatley why. My brain melted. yo.

Tucker said "Danny calm down and no I didn't hear her say that."

Danny said "Ok thne guys you must be pulling a prank on me or soemthing." Looks like spell check committed sue-icide.

Sam said "No Danny were not pulling a prank on you, now lets get to class before were late and Mr. Lancer gives us detention." And the grammar checker was never alive. yo.

Danny said " Ok maybe I am just imagining it."

Then they all went to class and actually got there on time. THE END. yo.

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Sarah Greenjuneluxray on August 20th, 2012 04:16 pm (UTC)
Very nicely done again. However, some of your text from the sporkers is white, like the original story. It can be confusing when in the middle of a paragraph someone sticks in their input and it's white. Your eyes can completely miss what's being said if you're skimming what's going on in the story (lest you get a headache from the sheer terribleness that is the fic.) I suggest changing the color of the spork comments with white text.

Oh, and by the way, there's about a ton of sporking fodder in the Danny Phantom fanfiction archives right now. I mean a ton. Raven Phantom, whatever Jaded Jimmie decided to brew up this week, the highway (yes, the title is in lower case,) DANNY PHANTOMS TWIN SISTER (this case in upper case,) and many more.

Spork on, friend. *salute*

Edited at 2012-08-20 04:17 pm (UTC)
HermyStarphantomsues on August 21st, 2012 12:20 am (UTC)
Re: Amusing.
Thanks. This spork gave us hell to post, and I had to sacriface the blue. I'll fix it soon.